OK guys. Let me know what you think. i'm not sure its finished.
She is taken to a beach across the hot dusty land
Away from her troubles and problems at hand
Under a tree she undresses to wade in the sea
Her slender body gently strides right past me
Unaware of my gaping and dazed gaze
She notices something off in the haze
Arcing up and down off in the distance
Something pointy pokes up at a glance
She smiles and remembers why she came
To get away from the painful mental game
It's the bobbing up of the dorsal fins
From the playful bounces of the dolphins
She wades waist deep in the warm and wet
wishing she could stay and until we met
she has watched him from afar
sipping umbrella drinks at the bar
wondering what he thought of her
and offering her great pleasure
wanting to runaway to stay
just to relax and to play
she twirls a cherry with her tongue
dreaming of songs to be sung
a strong wave rushes over her head
waking her from thoughts of her bed
startled she noticed what has come in
but the wake of a playful dolphin
Monday, June 2, 2008
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2 comments:
I already told you... it is so lovely.
for you then its done :-)
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